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Water

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I watch them come and go.

Some don't know how to swim,

While others do.

I wait patiently,

Slowly picking out my prey.

I spot this young girl.

Her face says it all, she's afraid.

I smile, watching her carefully.

I push my waves closer to her.

She yelps in shock of how cool I am.

I push more waves,

Slowly pulling her in.

She clams down and starts to enjoy my cool waters.

I laugh at her innocents.

Slowly she goes deeper and deeper.

I'll wait until she's far away from everyone.

She's finally where I want her.

I create a huge wave and knock her down.

She's trying the get up, but I keep sending more waves at her.

People finally notice her and rush to get her.

She's mine now.

With one last wave, I drag her down.

She's trying to escape my grasp, but it is no use.

Slowly I'm sinking her with me,

Until she can't breathe anymore.

I watch them come and go.
For the Face your Fears Contest being held by #We-Write-To-Escape

If you haven't guessed it, it's water. Yes MY biggest fear is being in water, like lakes, oceans, pools,etc. I had a really terrifying experience with water in my childhood.

Hope you enjoy!
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02AngelHugs's avatar
This game me the chills.. o_o Otherwise, greatly written :D