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I'm liked at school.

But I'm hated at home.

I am kind, caring and active.

But I am greedy, selfish, and lazy.

I stay quiet most of the time.

But I am loud, screaming for attention.

I stay on everybody's good side.

But I stay on their bad side.

I try to stay good.

But I stay bad.

I smile at everyone.

But I cry alone.

Everyone listens to me.

But no one listens to me.

I am happy most of the time.

But I am depressed most of the time.

I listen to everyone.

But I listen to no one.

I try not to make mistakes

But I make mistakes all the time.

I tell the truth most of the time.

But I tell lies most of the time.

Everyone believes me.

But no one believes me.

I am surrounded by people.

But I am alone.
This is really me at home and school.


I don't own the picture... it belongs to the person who made it.


EDIT: THANK YOU!!!!!! I never thought anybody would actually read this!!!! At least I know I'm not alone. :') <--- Tears of joy... Again THANK YOU, for everyone who read,faved, or just commented... :iconfinallyplz: :tighthug: :iconglomp1plz::iconglomp2plz:

Also I fixed the typo :iconsweatdropplz:
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:iconbluebrains:
BlueBrains Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
This is almost how I am but at home I'm quieter and at school I'm louder.
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:iconsuperm81:
superm81 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
this is so amazing...partially because i feel that so many people can and do relate to it...as youve probably noticed judging from all the comments lol
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:iconalyjayne123:
Alyjayne123 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate a lot to this :)
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:icongrey-assassin:
Grey-Assassin Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I could have swear I was reading my life.
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:icontorasagareitakaibubu:
that's exactly what my life is like...
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:iconmothquake:
mothquake Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gorgeous! :glomp:
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:iconblackflames101:
blackflames101 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
thank you!
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:iconlizdixviii:
LizDIXVIII Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student General Artist
damn... i can relate...
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:iconadventurer4ever:
Adventurer4ever Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
this is me....
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:iconsctira:
SCTira Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Sounds familiar...
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:iconblackflames101:
blackflames101 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
It does?
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:iconsctira:
SCTira Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
well i'm not sure but maybe it's just a, I dont know part of my imagination
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:icona7xfan666:
A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Awesome Job=)
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:iconaskhalstewart:
askHalstewart Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
aww I fell your describing me in a way:(
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:iconwebkinzagirl:
webkinzagirl Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
:( This is kinda side, but really good.
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:icondadona777:
dadona777 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
omg how????? you must be psychic because I swear that poem was about me... ;_;

it's very nice ^^
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:iconoxon1:
Oxon1 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
I like it
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:iconlil-redpwnedwolf:
Lil-RedPwnedWolf Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. I'm usually always depressed and people just walk on by.
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:iconlady-viola:
lady-viola Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012   Writer

nice poem. as beautiful as the writing is, it is a copyright violation. saying "i don't own the picture" doesn't make it any better. you either have legal permission or you don't. people click on this expecting to see something YOU have created, not ripped off of someone else. please remove it immediately or replace it with a graphic that belongs to you.
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:iconsctira:
SCTira Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
i'm like that too
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:iconsas0697:
sas0697 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
im like this too. not exactly but pretty close. i like it, good job ^__^
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:iconmeganechi:
Meganechi Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am like that too :)
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:icongroundedreamer:
groundedreamer Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is me too.
I liked it! :)
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:iconkawaiicutie1:
KawaiiCutie1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
hard cor man just touching :jawdrop:
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:iconghelikblack:
GhelikBlack Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
welcome to life
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:icontrekkie-aspie:
Trekkie-Aspie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Less twin and more niwt
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:iconekaluv26:
ekaluv26 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love this! I can sooooo relate!
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:iconburningseagulls:
BurningSeagulls Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Thiis fits me perfectly, beautiful <3
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:iconkilljoyatheart:
KilljoyAtHeart Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing.
Gah, of course people read it- because, just...oh. It's so true.
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:iconthecriticofinnocence:
TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Well, glad I'm not the only walking contradiction that I know of.

Well done.
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:iconbeokay:
BeOkay Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love this so much.((:
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:iconellesg:
ElleSG Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Everyone has this "two sides". It's a phenomenon called adolescence. It passes by when mature.
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:iconsilverstar1311:
Silverstar1311 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so true!
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:iconsarani-chan:
sarani-chan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
very lovely :clap:
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:iconskittles91k:
Skittles91k Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student Artist
This describes me so much!!!!
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:iconlinktheoverlord:
linktheoverlord Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Well there's my life all spelled out
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:iconhereiamramblingagain:
HeReIaMRaMbLiNgAgAin Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
im so much like this. so inspiring, thank you.
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:iconryuukuringo:
ryuukuringo Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student Filmographer
story of my life :aww:
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:iconsaara101:
saara101 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
oh my god every line describes me too <high five> :) ur not alone i know how u feel im not even kidding i do
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:iconskygal333:
skygal333 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Its all same for me.

A face for the world....and a true self when alone
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:iconoblivionedeternity:
OblivionedEternity Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how you feel :icondepressedonionplz: But I promise it gets better :)
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awesomersauce Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Beautiful poem i love it :)
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:iconkutaininja:
KuTaiNinja Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is me at work and at home right now.
thank you!!
your not alone and neither am I.
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:iconflowerpanda:
Flowerpanda Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
I love this. If you need anyone to talk to, I'm here! :')
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:iconthegothicaangel:
TheGothicAangel Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i realy like this :) good to hear/ read that im not alone in feeling that way ;P
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:iconmuseofnerds:
Museofnerds Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
I love this because it is just like me
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:iconcatkitz27:
Catkitz27 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student General Artist
It's so beautiful *favorites*
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:iconlyfesjoker:
LyfesJoker Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am almost exactly the same
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:iconhotty-chans-yaoi:
Hotty-Chans-Yaoi Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
o~o
That sounds like me...
All the time.
e u e But I have depression, so of couurrse it sounds, like me.
Love it. e u e
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ThePokemonSplicer Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
You speak to me from the soul.
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